temple


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Title     temple
Artist     savialeigh/Rikki (3,698) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     ps
Subject     Fantasy
Style     Photographic
Medium     Digital Photograph
Submitted     July 24, 2003 8:57:18 PM CDT
Views     595
Rating     9 Thumb-up

IR+.

I don't know why it loaded so dark.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from jarillazoid/Thomas (134) Send mail to this user on July 25, 2003 5:05:17 PM CDT (3)

I guess i'm almost afraid to say what i see having read the other critiques and having no positive idea as to the intention of the artist but this image appears very strongly in my mind to be that of a women in the proceess of giving birth hence the Temple atc. etc.

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From imp/Sharie (12,907) Send mail to this user on July 25, 2003 5:31:29 PM CDT

I think your insight on this is very good..we see what our mind is open to see

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From savialeigh/Rikki (3,698) Send mail to this user on July 25, 2003 6:10:15 PM CDT

I see that. This is what makes feedback wonderful, learning what others see. The way I see art, if you get what I wanted, good. If you get something else, that's good too. Only when you don't get anything is there a problem. =)

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Thumb-up    from jccrawford/JC (2,038) Send mail to this user on July 25, 2003 1:16:31 AM CDT (2) Early critique

Maybe some noise and cloning in the clouds is needed. I just don't like obviousness of the mirroring effect.

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From savialeigh/Rikki (3,698) Send mail to this user on July 25, 2003 12:23:44 PM CDT

This is missing some of the work done, I 'dropped' it! When I fix that, I will look at further adjustment of the sky for variance. Good point.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from deleted30/deleted (4,981) Send mail to this user on July 24, 2003 11:25:53 PM CDT (3) Early critique

Ok Ms Savia this shot is amazing IMHO. I love the mysterious look and the darkness doesn't bother me in the least bit. The person up in the clouds is so eery. I am assuming you mirrored the image and I would have to say this is the perfect image to do that to. I honestly can't find anything I would improve here!!

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From savialeigh/Rikki (3,698) Send mail to this user on July 25, 2003 12:22:16 PM CDT

=) I can! I have realized that it is so dark because this isn't the finished version. It's supposed to be dark, but not this dark, or so flat.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from imp/Sharie (12,907) Send mail to this user on July 24, 2003 10:21:21 PM CDT (3) Early critique

Oh wow I love it. I don't care about the darkness....it adds to and compliments this art work. This has a biblical look and feel. Don't know if that was the intention but wow. I see a charoit pulled by a team of white horses on both sides. The center I see an emerging queen. maybe the horse are helping her emerge. This is a very strong, emotional and eye catchin work. The dockis an element needed for her landing per se'

I don't know what you felt creating this, if anything like i get a shiver up my spine on some powerful, emotive type works.

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From savialeigh/Rikki (3,698) Send mail to this user on July 25, 2003 12:27:35 PM CDT

Ah, you see it slightly differently than I did, and now I can see your vision too, thank you! It is darker than it should be, and some details are missing. I'll have to see if the master file is missing the info too, or its just the web file.

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