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Astrophysik

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Title     Astrophysik
Artist     gerhardbusch1/Gerhard (10,332) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Collage
Subject     Humor
Style     Photographic
Medium     Digital Photograph
Software     Adobe Photoshop
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     August 17, 2009 11:32:07 AM CDT
Views     220
Rating     1 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up    from philbradley/Phil (2,239) Send mail to this user on August 17, 2009 3:51:38 PM CDT (1) Early critique

It's an interesting surreal piece; I assume there's some sort of point in the image, but I'm not sure quite what it is. There are a few problems with the image IMO. The grey/white slabs look exactly like that - I'm presuming that they're supposed to be some sort of divider between rooms in some sort of museum? They need a little more work to give them a realistic look. The globe on the white wall which stretches outwards has a shadow, which is good, but it's incorrectly placed, going over the white and grey slabs in equal measure. The light source is from the small white lights above so the shadow wouldn't work that way anyway. The further grey slab needs more work and needs to be properly embedded on the floor - it's just sitting on top of the earth at the moment. The white wall that is behind the rubble doesn't have a line down the middle to illustrate the corner - as it stands it's just a white slab. So - nice idea, but needs more work IMO.

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