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from rickko0519/Ricky (987) 
on November 4, 2009 9:12:39 PM CST
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Hello Barbro... Initially I had some interest from looking at the thumbnail, but I have to admitt that it faded a little when I opened up this photo. I think that this could be improved, by more dramatic lighting... so that you can bring out objects of interest and keep others back as support. Also, I think that picking a subject that has more interest would be beneficial, or maybe I'm just missing the point here - it wouldn't be the first time - Rick
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From barbro/Barbro (472)
on November 5, 2009 1:50:12 AM CST
dramatic lightning I can agree to. I shoot for my own sake, not for the public. I seek the shadows, the light, and unusual motives. thank you for critique this one. /barbro
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from ankie/Anneke (5,174) 
on November 3, 2009 2:56:11 PM CST
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Hello Barbro,
Again, a play of light and shadow. Your composition is really good and to me this would have been a beautiful picture if those cars had not been in it and if you had added just a little more light and/or brightness.
Best regards,
Anneke.
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From barbro/Barbro (472)
on November 5, 2009 1:48:27 AM CST
thank you Anneke. The title is underground garage and in garage there is cars. /barbro
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