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underground garage

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Title     underground garage
Artist     barbro/Barbro (586) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Shadows
Subject     Cityscape
Style     Photographic
Medium     Digital Photograph
Software     Adobe Photoshop
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     November 2, 2009 7:19:41 AM CST
Views     212
Rating     2 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up    from rickko0519/Ricky (1,001) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 9:12:39 PM CST (2) Early critique

Hello Barbro... Initially I had some interest from looking at the thumbnail, but I have to admitt that it faded a little when I opened up this photo. I think that this could be improved, by more dramatic lighting... so that you can bring out objects of interest and keep others back as support. Also, I think that picking a subject that has more interest would be beneficial, or maybe I'm just missing the point here - it wouldn't be the first time - Rick

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From barbro/Barbro (586) Send mail to this user on November 5, 2009 1:50:12 AM CST

dramatic lightning I can agree to. I shoot for my own sake, not for the public. I seek the shadows, the light, and unusual motives. thank you for critique this one. /barbro

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Thumb-up    from ankie/Anneke (7,079) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on November 3, 2009 2:56:11 PM CST (2) Early critique

Hello Barbro,

Again, a play of light and shadow. Your composition is really good and to me this would have been a beautiful picture if those cars had not been in it and if you had added just a little more light and/or brightness.

Best regards,
Anneke.

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From barbro/Barbro (586) Send mail to this user on November 5, 2009 1:48:27 AM CST

thank you Anneke. The title is underground garage and in garage there is cars. /barbro

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