Dog Guarding Piece of Bread


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Title     Dog Guarding Piece of Bread
Artist     sedatkisa/Sedat (1,105) Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Human
Subject     Portraiture
Style     Photographic
Software     Adobe Photoshop
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     November 3, 2009 9:40:01 AM CST
Views     356
Rating     14 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from majikrose/Cherie (27,214) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 1:04:42 PM CST (2)

Sedat;

This is a beautifully done filtered/photographic composition of the woman walking with her dog, as they are in motion, her foot is lifted up into her skirt looking as though she is taking that next step forward, nice tones overall, very soothing.

This has a very rustic look to it, and IMO it would look nicely in an entrance way to a home.

Thank you for sharing,

Keep right on experimenting,

Cherie

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From sedatkisa/Sedat (1,105) Send mail to this user on November 5, 2009 12:17:37 AM CST

Hi Cherie, good reading of the pic. thank you for your kind crit.Regards...Sedat

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from zoranvedek/Jason (2,010) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 2:49:12 AM CST (3)

Love this piece, it's got everything working for it, angles, colors, layout, and it says a lot without being a lot.

I do, however, find the foreground being darkened a bit of a distraction, I can't help but feel the whole thing would stand out more if it were lighter, maybe original, maybe even lightened from there, maybe just the road itself. I can see you've down it to pull the viewer in, but it feels almost against the grain of everything else, perhaps because the shadows go in a different direction than the darkened area seems to be leading.

-J

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From sedatkisa/Sedat (1,105) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 3:09:47 AM CST

Hi Jason,thank you for your kind crit.Regards...Sedat

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from ankie/Anneke (7,079) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on November 3, 2009 3:48:22 PM CST (3) Early critique

Hello Sedat,

I will give you a 3TU, because this is so very beautiful - your choice of subject, the light and the colours are all excellent. But I have to say that I think it's a real pity that this woman seems to have only one leg!

Best regards,
Anneke

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From sedatkisa/Sedat (1,105) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 3:05:32 AM CST

Hi Anneke, good eye,thank you for your kind and generous crit.Regards...Sedat

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from plopidol/Gareth (1,653) Send mail to this user on November 3, 2009 3:14:14 PM CST (2) Early critique

I think the way you have handled this is excellent. The way you have highlighted the woman and her guardiad angel is lovely. The little bit of road and verge also work well, just a hint of background light.

Gareth

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From sedatkisa/Sedat (1,105) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 3:04:28 AM CST

Hi Gareth,thank you for your kind and generous crit.Regards...Sedat

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Thumb-up Thumb-up Thumb-up    from wuploteg/Guillermo (5,818) Send mail to this user on November 3, 2009 10:42:35 AM CST (3) Early critique

What an excellent photo submission. The colours are so strong, bold and effective. I really enjoy it's vibrancy. The subjects are nice and well lit. Great job.

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From sedatkisa/Sedat (1,105) Send mail to this user on November 4, 2009 3:03:35 AM CST

Hi Guillermo, glad you like it, thank you for your kind crit.Regards...Sedat

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