Critiques
This work currently has 5 conforming critiques.
Since there are already at least three conforming critiques, if you write another conforming critique for this work, then you will receive only the usual one critique point every time another user rates your critique helpful.
Write a critique
If you find one of these critiques especially helpful--or especially unhelpful--then please take a moment to register your opinion by clicking one of the buttons to the right of the critique.
|
|
from tave/Tavius (13,557) 
on November 11, 2009 9:18:25 PM CST
(1)
Hello Marta, Another wonderful image of your friend at the window! I have to agree this is haunting, in a good way :) very emotive! nice work with the mist on the window glass! Great lighting, textures & tones as well. Bravo! Dear Marta & best of regards, Tave :)
Reply
Show ratings
|
From gian87/Marta (10,569)
on November 11, 2009 10:23:09 PM CST
Glad that you like it. Many thanks dear Tave:_**)
Reply
|
|
|
|
| | |
|
|
|
from gregmclemore/Greg (1,699)
on November 7, 2009 11:56:34 PM CST
(2)
Beautifully revealing, there is a strong pleasingly haunting quality to this superb and creative piece. strong composition and masterful display, well done.
Reply
Show ratings
|
|
|
| | |
|
|
|
from zoranvedek/Jason (1,805)
on November 7, 2009 10:34:02 PM CST
(3)
I've been looking over thisone for a bit now. Ilove the textures on the wood withthe pealing paint, accented by the water streaked texture on the glass. The obscured face with an emotion I can't quite put finger on(is it sadness, longing, indifference apathy?),really makes this piece
..........and it wouldn't be half as nice in color or black and white, this thing screams for sepia toning, which you've added to to it's full effect.
Thanks,
-J
Reply
Show ratings
|
|
From gian87/Marta (10,569)
on November 7, 2009 11:23:46 PM CST
thanks Jason.. it is ... Mmmmmmmmmm.. a strong state of emotion..much melancholy..but never indifference..and.. almost the EYE is all here..Thanks again..M.
Reply
|
|
|
|
| | |
|
|
|
from cremmins/Ian (200)
on November 7, 2009 4:30:11 PM CST
(3)
Great image and very emotive, i really like the different texture on the glass that shows the eye on the right(our right)different to the rest of the glass, the only thing that niggles me is the slight slant of the window frame leaning inwards on the left but the frame on the right is vertically straight, if they were both straight or both crooked it would have more impact and would not have that lean catching the eye so much
Reply
Show ratings
|
|
From gian87/Marta (10,569)
on November 7, 2009 11:38:16 PM CST
Thank you very much Ian by your suggestion, and it seems to me very good. Very well expressed. Anyway, I have my doubt about another inclination of the frame.. the main point is deliberately in the eye . To that eye it falls all the weight of the emotion that is very strong .
Regards,marta
Reply
|
|
|
From cremmins/Ian (200)
on November 8, 2009 7:29:14 AM CST
I agree, the frame is just a slight distraction, your happy with it, thats the main thing
Reply
|
|
|
From gian87/Marta (10,569)
on November 8, 2009 10:50:01 AM CST
Ian,I do not know almost anything of English and I dont understand well your reply.. Sorry for that...Perhaps the frame is improvable to the benefit of the whole of the photo, that is what it interests to me. I am no happy with it, I am here for showing my works and mainly to learn to improve them..The eye is an important element in this case, nothing more.. Thanks again,M..
Reply
|
|
|
|
| | |
|
|
|
from caroleee/Carole (21,647)
on November 5, 2009 11:48:48 PM CST
(4)
I love the idea of this and the toning, I wish that the whole area in front of the face were like the drippy right side though, although the way it is does give a feeling of mystery! Carole
Reply
Show ratings
|
|
From gian87/Marta (10,569)
on November 7, 2009 11:30:12 PM CST
Many thanks Carole. Glad for having put another work..My style is quite strange, I know this dear friend.. I do not observe the academic rules that are excellent.. I cant.. my main way to express me is my heart and my eyes..
hug, Marta
Reply
|
|
|
|
Comments
Comments are different from critiques. Comments carry no rating, you may write more than one comment per work, and you may comment on your own works. If you want to rate this work, then you should write a critique instead.
Add a comment
There are no comments on this work.
Return to works
|
