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from mkarliner/Michael (97) 
on November 8, 2009 4:52:33 AM CST
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Hmm, obviously, a smashing pic. Could do with a little more cropping to remove what seems to me the irrelevant apples(?) top left, and possibly even the vertical of the stairs. I just tried that in photoshop, and it really intensifies the little girls stare. My other suggestion is to drop the effect. I'm not quite sure what it is, but it doesn't do anything for my appreciation of the picture, and the noise it brings out in her tights and knees is distracting for me.
Nice stuff...
Mike
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From rickko0519/Ricky (1,001)
on November 8, 2009 12:54:41 PM CST
Thanks a lot Michael, for taking the time to offer some good suggestions and comments - I will look into giving the crop a try and do a comparison of one w/o the effects - I appreciate your review - Rick
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from mccook36/Merv (5,089)
on November 7, 2009 3:47:09 PM CST
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You've captured a look any parent would recognize, Rick. The manipulation works pretty good. The pumpkins, upper left, keep attracting my attention. I'd clone them out or crop a little tighter.
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From rickko0519/Ricky (1,001)
on November 7, 2009 10:37:30 PM CST
Thanks very much for your suggestions, and comments - I appreciate them - Rick
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from wuploteg/Guillermo (5,818)
on November 6, 2009 1:50:55 AM CST
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Interesting work, I like the color in this photography, nice sharpnes of image and good light, bets regards.
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From rickko0519/Ricky (1,001)
on November 6, 2009 5:04:33 PM CST
Hi Guillermo - Thanks for taking the time to review my work - Rick
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