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from caroleee/Carole (21,647) 
on November 8, 2009 9:52:27 PM CST
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I really like the colors and the flower stems are whimsical and fun. I am not sure about the ball above the bird as it's light color keeps drawing my eye up. Very nicely done. Carole
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From jeremy/Jeremy (1,623) 
on November 8, 2009 10:03:53 PM CST
Thanks for that Carole. I think you are right. The white ball is actually the sun which is more or less an icon in my work, but I will take it out....Jeremy
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From caroleee/Carole (21,647)
on November 8, 2009 11:05:06 PM CST
Well if it's the sun, perhaps just darken it so you can keep your icon but it isn't such a light value?
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From jeremy/Jeremy (1,623)
on November 9, 2009 3:36:53 AM CST
Yes I can lose it I think, thanks Carole. It is so helpful to see paintings through somebody else's eyes it helps me learn to see again.
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from mccook36/Merv (2,202)
on November 7, 2009 3:35:33 PM CST
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I like the bright colors and the composition is fine. It's the details, like the people stems and the birds, that make for such an interesting painting. It has a modern feel to it...21st century art.
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from bellamahri/Tina (5,882)
on November 6, 2009 9:43:48 PM CST
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Interesting concept, Jeremy. The "people" stems are well designed. I like the colours and overall composition. Thanks for sharing. Tina
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