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The Flower Arranger - from the Fat Lady Series

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Title     The Flower Arranger - from the Fat Lady Series
Artist     jeremy/Jeremy (1,692) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Fat Lady Series
Subject     Fantasy
Style     Painterly
Media     Oil
Paper
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     November 6, 2009 7:43:07 PM CST
Views     334
Rating     6 Thumb-up

This is the latest in my Fat Lady Series. Any comments or advice gratefully received. Thanks.....Jeremy

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from caroleee/Carole (22,039) Send mail to this user on November 8, 2009 9:52:27 PM CST (2) Early critique

I really like the colors and the flower stems are whimsical and fun. I am not sure about the ball above the bird as it's light color keeps drawing my eye up. Very nicely done. Carole

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From jeremy/Jeremy (1,692) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on November 8, 2009 10:03:53 PM CST

Thanks for that Carole. I think you are right. The white ball is actually the sun which is more or less an icon in my work, but I will take it out....Jeremy

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From caroleee/Carole (22,039) Send mail to this user on November 8, 2009 11:05:06 PM CST

Well if it's the sun, perhaps just darken it so you can keep your icon but it isn't such a light value?

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From jeremy/Jeremy (1,692) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on November 9, 2009 3:36:53 AM CST

Yes I can lose it I think, thanks Carole. It is so helpful to see paintings through somebody else's eyes it helps me learn to see again.

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from mccook36/Merv (5,089) Send mail to this user on November 7, 2009 3:35:33 PM CST (2) Early critique

I like the bright colors and the composition is fine. It's the details, like the people stems and the birds, that make for such an interesting painting. It has a modern feel to it...21st century art.

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From jeremy/Jeremy (1,692) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on November 7, 2009 5:11:08 PM CST

Thanks Merve

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from bellamahri/Tina (7,000) Send mail to this user on November 6, 2009 9:43:48 PM CST (2) Early critique

Interesting concept, Jeremy. The "people" stems are well designed. I like the colours and overall composition. Thanks for sharing. Tina

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From jeremy/Jeremy (1,692) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on November 7, 2009 7:55:03 AM CST

Thanks Tina......Jeremy

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